Education Department's English Teaching Guide Branded an `Ugly Piece of Prose'

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IT IS responsible for ensuring that millions of children learn to read and write properly. But the Department for Education and Skills stood accused yesterday of crimes against the English language.

Three leading writers - playwright Simon Gray, biographer Selina Hastings and poet Anthony Thwaite - expressed disgust at the "bad grammar, pretentious barbarisms and vulgarisms" in the Whitehall department's own guide to teaching English to teenagers.

They were asked by the Royal Society of Literature to judge the handbook, Framework for Teaching English: Years 7, 8 and 9 (ages 11 to 14).

A typical paragraph of the guide reads: "Support is focused in the core subjects of English, mathematics and science together with other language- rich subjects as humanities and R.E.

"Departments have to bid in for support, making clear their commitment to the work and nature of development required."

Mr Gray and Mr Thwaite gave no points at all for the writing style while Ms Hastings took pity and gave the DfES 30 per cent.

Mr Thwaite said he was dismayed by the "bad grammar, pretentious barbarisms and vulgarisms which sound like stuff produced by third- rate advertising copywriters". He asked: "How can children learn clarity and elegance of expression if their teachers think this is the way to write?"

Ms Hastings said the reliance on jargon was "not only unpleasing to the ear but tends to obscure the sense", branding the guide "an ugly piece of prose". …