enthusiasm of passion," he wrote in his commonplace-book; 3 and his emotion was none the less powerful for being harnessed to a convention of rural courtship. It often happened in that age of folk dance and folk music that lovers sang songs to their mistresses with as sweet and proud a grace as the sonneteers of an earlier time and a higher social class. The Ayrshire of those days must have been almost as much a nest of singing birds as Elizabethan England is reputed to have been: not even the Kirk could stamp out the singing and making of songs, and (who knows?) even Holy Willie himself may have been known to "roar a ditty up" in his hot youth. Burns was doing nothing out of the ordinary when he wrote "O, once I lov'd." One of his companions had already sung to Nelly Kirkpatrick a song of local composition, though he had not made it himself; Robert simply wished to go one better by producing something of his very own. 4 "O, once I lov'd" differs from anonymous folk-songs only in that we know who the author was. If we are to believe Burns's account of how he came to write it, it was intended for oral delivery and to be sung to a tune, I am a man un- married, which has unfortunately not survived. Right in this very first work of his, Burns's vocabulary is both Scots and English. The poem does not move from a Scottish beginning to an apparently English conclusion, as is common in many of his later works, but from English to Scots and then back to English again. Long before he came up against the advice of the Edinburgh literati, who told him to learn classical mythology and write in heroic couplets, he found himself poised between two languages, two mental worlds. "O, once I lov'd" owes whatever character it possesses to the alternation between them; and the point of beginning and return, the centre of its statement, is quite definitely English. Though words like "virtue, reputation, qualities," or metaphors like "it's innocence and modesty that polishes the dart," are from the common stock of art-song, they had in all probability become folk ____________________ | 3 | Robert Burns Commonplace Book 1783-1785, edd. J. C. Ewing and D. Cook, henceforth cited as R. B. Commonplace Book, Glasgow 1938, p.5. | | 4 | See Burns's autobiographical letter to [Dr John Moore], 2 Aug. 1787, in The Letters of Robert Burns, ed. J. De Lancey Ferguson, henceforth cited as Letters, 2 vols., Oxford 1931, VOL. I, p. 108. | -2- |