Write in Style: A Guide to Good English

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TRIUMPHS

Style is a magic wand, and turns to gold everything it touches.

Logan Pearsall Smith

We've just looked at various examples of how not to write. Now let's redress the balance by considering some admirable passages. My illustrations have been chosen to match the types of writing included in the previous section: a passage of instructional prose; the beginning of a student essay; a newspaper article; an advanced philosophical discourse.

1. Taken from Sir Izaak Walton's masterpiece, The Compleat Angler.

How To Dress A Chub For Table

First scale him, and then wash him clean, and then take out his guts; and to that end make the hole as little and as near to his gills as you may conveniently, and especially make clean his throat from the grass and weeds that are usually in it, for if that be not very clean, it will make him to taste very sour; having so done, put some sweet herbs into his belly, and then tie him with two or three splinters to a spit, and roast him, basted often with vinegar, or rather verjuice * and butter, and with a good store of salt mixed with it.

If he is thus dressed, you will find him a much better dish of meat than you, or most folk, even the Anglers themselves do imagine; for this dries up the fluid watery humour with which all Chubs do abound.

This has considerable charm and it flows easily. Its chief quality, however, is its clarity: the careful organization and precise detail create a foolproof guide.

2. The start of an A Level essay on As I Lay Dying, a novel by William Faulkner.

As the title so bluntly suggests, the novel is concerned wholly with death. It is void of any romanticism, and death itself is treated with little religious significance; it is the finality of death in a world

* 'Verjuice' is the juice of an unripe fruit.

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  • Title Page iii
  • From the Reviews: vi
  • Contents vii
  • List of Exercises xi
  • Acknowledgements xiv
  • Preface xv
  • Part One - Engage Brain and Ear Before Writing 1
  • 1 - Disasters 3
  • 2 - Triumphs 9
  • Part Two - Foundations 13
  • 3 - Introduction 15
  • 4 - Bone Structure 16
  • 5 - Joints 28
  • Part Three - Style 65
  • 6 - Introduction: Style Versus Fashion 67
  • 7 - Fight the Flab 70
  • 8 - Voice 109
  • Part Four - Tailor-Made 139
  • 9 - Introduction 141
  • 10 - Letters 142
  • 11 - Essays 161
  • 12 - Articles 189
  • 13 - Reviews 192
  • 14 - Reports 194
  • 15 - Minutes 199
  • 16 - PrÉcis and Summary 203
  • 17 - Reportage 225
  • Part Five - Grammar Primer 229
  • 18 - Grammar Primer 231
  • 19 - Inflections 274
  • 20 - Syntax 286
  • 21 - Parts of Speech (Advanced) 294
  • 22 - Punctuation in Speech and Quotation 315
  • 23 - Spelling and Confusibles 327
  • Appendix: Answers to Exercises 343
  • Further Reading 355
  • Authors, Sources and Named References 359
  • Subject Index 361
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